Resume: stronger wording throughout

A review pass over the resume: the summary leads with what Greg does, the
Implico bullets lead with ownership and put Carrier Connect's scale next to
the work, and the earlier roles lead with their strongest title. No new
facts; every number is Greg's.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_012aSbo2D1qP8cMFQCykf7kx

tools/migrate/src/seed.ts

@@ -275,35 +275,35 @@ export const experience: Record<string, Record<string, unknown>> = {
     location: "Remote",
     focus: "Leading the team behind Carrier Connect, an SAP logistics platform for third-party carriers.",
     bullets: [
-      "Architected Carrier Connect, an SDM for SAP tool suite that connects third-party carriers to a central purchase order system, tracks loading and delivery events, and streamlines documents.",
-      "Designed several integration paths into one delivery interface (REST APIs, Excel and CSV file transfer, and the companion Driver App), and personally built the delivery interface, the file transfer interfaces and the inventory polling and delivery system.",
-      "Carrier Connect runs at 99.999% uptime and handles 2,000+ orders a day for 500+ active users across 50+ companies, saving about 72 hours per delivery.",
-      "Lead a development team of 4, plus 6 extended members on the US Managed Services team, owning career paths, yearly reviews and resource planning.",
-      "Run sales demos and customer presentations, gather requirements, train customers and own their communication, and handle network engineering and administration.",
-      "Set the team's coding standards on Google's published best practices, along with code review, pull request, testing and code coverage standards.",
-      "Brought React and AI-assisted development to the team, and was the main author of its responsible AI guidelines: factual accuracy, reputation and transparency, human oversight, data security, and consequences for misuse.",
+      "Architected Carrier Connect, an SDM for SAP platform that connects third-party carriers to a central purchase order system; it handles 2,000+ orders a day for 500+ active users at 50+ companies with 99.999% uptime.",
+      "Save about 72 hours per delivery by tracking loading and delivery events and streamlining documents in one system.",
+      "Built the core delivery interface, the file transfer interfaces and the inventory polling and delivery system, and designed the REST API, Excel and CSV, and Driver App integration paths that feed it.",
+      "Lead a 4-person development team and 6 extended US Managed Services members, owning career paths, yearly reviews and resource planning.",
+      "Run the customer side: sales demos, presentations, requirement gathering, training and ongoing communication. Also handle network engineering and administration.",
+      "Established the team's engineering standards on Google's published best practices: code review, pull requests, testing and code coverage.",
+      "Introduced React and AI-assisted development, and was lead author of the team's responsible AI guidelines covering accuracy, transparency, human oversight, data security and accountability.",
     ],
     tech: ["React Native", "React", "Python", "SAP CAP", "SAP BTP (Cloud Foundry)", "SAP Build Work Zone", "SAP Build Apps", "SAP Integration Suite", "iOS", "Android"],
   },
   drexel: {
-    role: "Assistant System Administrator, then Computer Lab Help Desk",
+    role: "Assistant System Administrator",
     end: "2018-06",
     earlier: true,
-    focus: "Maintained the college's 4 Linux servers and automated every workstation in 3 labs and the laptop carts with Ansible.",
+    focus: "Ran the college's 4 Linux servers and automated 3 computer labs and the laptop carts with Ansible; stayed on at the lab help desk to 2018.",
     bullets: [
-      "Maintained the college's Linux server network (4 servers serving the whole College of Computing and Informatics) with Ansible, Bash, Python and MySQL.",
+      "Ran the Linux server network for the whole College of Computing and Informatics (4 servers) with Ansible, Bash, Python and MySQL.",
       "Automated deployment and maintenance of every workstation in the 3 computer labs and the mobile laptop carts with Ansible.",
       "Protected college-wide data with Ceph storage backups.",
       "Stayed on at the Computer Lab help desk through June 2018, supporting faculty, staff and students.",
     ],
   },
   comcast_1: {
-    role: "Junior Developer (co-op), then Senior Intern",
+    role: "Senior Intern and Junior Developer (co-op)",
     earlier: true,
-    focus: "Led 10 co-ops building smart remote, call center and inventory tools, and built an NLP sentiment pipeline for leadership.",
+    focus: "Ran a team of 10 co-ops building smart remote, call center and inventory tools; built an NLP pipeline turning customer speech and reviews into sentiment for leadership.",
     bullets: [
       "Hired back after the co-op as Senior Intern to run a team of 10 co-ops building smart remote, call center and inventory tools.",
-      "Built an NLP system that gathered remote speech input and reviews so leadership teams could gauge customer sentiment (Java, Groovy, Grails, Elasticsearch, MySQL).",
+      "Built an NLP system that turned remote speech input and reviews into customer sentiment for leadership teams (Java, Groovy, Grails, Elasticsearch, MySQL).",
       "Built call center and inventory features on the internal logistics platform for techs and warehouse teams (PHP, MySQL).",
       "Worked in weeklong Agile sprints.",
     ],
@@ -323,10 +323,10 @@ export const resumePage = {
     { value: "10", label: "People led", detail: "Development and Managed Services" },
   ],
   projects: [
-    { title: "Cosmos homelab", detail: "20+ Docker containers working with 17 AI agents on a private network." },
-    { title: "GregKilmer.com", detail: "This site, run from an Obsidian vault through a rule-checked content service and MCP server." },
+    { title: "Cosmos homelab", detail: "Runs 20+ Docker containers alongside 17 AI agents, all on a private network." },
+    { title: "GregKilmer.com", detail: "This site: pages fed from an Obsidian vault through a rule-checked content service, with an MCP server for AI agents." },
   ],
-  body: `I have a strong eye for software design and architecture, and a broad range of experience across cloud, app and game development. I stay current with the cutting edge of AI and use AI tools to speed up my workflow, but I'm skilled enough to do the work without them.`,
+  body: `Software architect and team lead who takes SAP BTP cloud and mobile systems from the first customer demo through architecture, delivery and support. Broad background across cloud, app and game development. Uses AI tools to work faster, with the fundamentals to work without them and the guidelines to use them responsibly.`,
 };
 
 /** legacy/src/components/professional/EducationHistory.astro and Certifications.astro */

tools/migrate/test/migrate.test.ts

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ describe("migration", () => {
 
   it("takes the resume from Greg's interview answers", () => {
     const implico = find("experience", "Team Lead, BTP Cloud & Mobile Apps and US Managed Services at Implico Inc.")!.data as any;
-    expect(implico.bullets.join(" ")).toContain("500+ active users across 50+ companies");
+    expect(implico.bullets.join(" ")).toContain("500+ active users at 50+ companies");
     expect(implico.bullets.join(" ")).toContain("sales demos");
     expect(result.notes.filter((n) => n.data.type === "experience" && (n.data as any).earlier)).toHaveLength(2);
     expect(find("page", "Resume")?.data).toMatchObject({ page: "/resume", stats: expect.any(Array), projects: expect.any(Array) });